a poet’s notebook

Snapshot Poem 21 June 02006

summer solstice ~
    longing for someone
    who doesn’t long back

shell

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5 responses to “Snapshot Poem 21 June 02006”

  1. Francesca Gray Avatar

    Poingnant and lovely.

  2. endment Avatar

    Painful
    I wish you someone who longs back:)

  3. SB Avatar

    Ummm, — from my About page:

    Disclaimer
    Please do not assume that the speaker/ subject of my poems is me.
    In these times of creative nonfiction and fictionalized memoirs, I think of the poem itself as true fiction: it is most likely not factual, but it must be true.
    It is likely to be — it is best if it is — a truth I did not know before I wrote, and may not understand even then.
    A poem is my way of discovering (dis-covering) what I feel; sometimes, what I think — but it is not necessarily biographical.

    So — I’ve been there, but I’m not there now.

  4. ALAN Avatar
    ALAN

    LIFE (SPIRIT; INTELLECTUAL ACTIVITY; ETC.)
    EXISTS (OPERATES; ACHIEVES; ABIDES; RELATES)
    BETWEEN (METAPHORICALLY AS NECESSARY)
    THE CLOUDS (STEAM)
    AND THE GLACIER (ICE)
    IN THE THIN FILM OF NOW (A PUDDLE)
    WHICH IS ALWAYS
    RUNNING AWAY
    EVAPORATING
    OR FREEZING SOLID
    nOW TO EXPLAIN PLASMA

  5. Stray Avatar

    Exquisite agony.
    I’m glad for you that you’re not there now.

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