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Enough

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This week's prompt is enough, a word that evokes abundance, which is what I expected to write about. I am certainly abundantly surrounded.

But instead, this:

 

enough of white rooms
wheeled carts, wheeled beds, wheeled chairs
sheets sopping with drugged dreams
stick fingers & brittle nails

enough long nights listening
for breathing

or silence

watching for birds out the window
some sign of flight & freedom

enough bathing of fragile flesh
sheets stiff & clean, so little left of the body
there is nothing to leave behind

enough remembering & forgetting

enough bravery, enough cheer
narrow bundles off to the fire
enough holding on & letting go
how is emptiness so heavy?

enough enough enough

 

 

15 responses to “Enough”

  1. Heart breaking honesty with enough-ness. Well penned and posed.

  2. A cri de coeur with which I can identify. Powerful and moving, Sharon.

  3. Gorgeous and compelling. “how is emptiness so heavy?” is the perfect question.
    Thank you for joining us this week. Wishing you well.

  4. enough … of the ugly … absolutely
    enough … of the beautiful … most definitely not
    “how is emptiness so heavy?” — ah, those haunting-questions for which quite assuredly no answers are to be found
    but then if never asked — beautiful writings such as this would not be penned….
    I am selfish .. my glass is at one-half .. I want more.
    Thank you again for sharing your Gift…

  5. This poem captures the hospital experience so vividly I can almost hear the beep, beep, beeping. It strongly conveys the tired feeling that comes from dealing with illness. Enough!

  6. i have been there with your narrator. oh, how difficult, but you’ve mined it exquisitely. isn’t it interesting how you anticipated writing about abundance?

  7. A beautiful response. For me, it was enough at ‘How is emptiness so heavy?’ which summed up everything perfectly.

  8. So very sad, but a part of life most of us have to deal with eventually. I hope when my time comes, I will say “enough” before I become a burden…

  9. I went through that with both my parents a couple years ago, and I totally understand the “enough”. The “watching for birds out the window/some sign of flight & freedom” really resonated with me- there was a bird feeder right outside my parents’ window. Beautifully written!

  10. I wanted to say too that this resonated and the final repetition of ‘enough’ had gathered so much weight.

  11. Having recently been in this place, I resonated with your words. This is an abundance we would all prefer to avoid, but most can not. Would far prefer to have been a small bird with freedom to fly. And yes, the heaviness is enough, enough…
    Elizabeth

  12. Thank you for visiting my blog.
    This is a beautifully written, heartrending poem. I’ve been there too, and feel much sympathy for you.

  13. Sometimes enough really is too much. A heartfelt poem.

  14. Thank you for your visit to my blog and your kind comment. More than that though, thank you for this gorgeous, heartrending poem. I’ve read and sat with it, with its narrator, five or six times. This one will stay with me…

  15. Beautifully written piece.
    Pamela

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