Audrey folds the quilt
at the bottom of the bed.
Chilled in the night, I reach
one-handed and pull it up
under my chin. It unfurls
smoothly, unlike love.
Snapshot Poem 04 March 02009
Audrey folds the quilt
at the bottom of the bed.
Chilled in the night, I reach
one-handed and pull it up
under my chin. It unfurls
smoothly, unlike love.
5 responses to “Snapshot Poem 04 March 02009”
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Great snapshot of a relationship! How can so few words evoke so much feeling!
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Poignant and subtle. Very nice!
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Neat, very neat! I love the concept of your snapshot poems.
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Very nice. a snap shot poem is clever. Nicely done.
love-bd -
Clever one.
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