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Poem Dance!

We have the beginning of a poem dance. This is the one I posted yesterday:

at the end of winter
at the end of a warm day

dusty rain

and here is Niki's response:

after a day of sun
after working the garden
     sideways snow

from jenett:

in the heat of worry
in a storm of regret
  nothing changes

from Shelley:

under moss
under fallen leaves
forgotten acorns
 

before she left
before what passed for love —
who were you then?
 

from Paisley:

as the breath leaves
as the soul escapes
life begins

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7 responses to “Poem Dance!”

  1. in the heat of worry
    in a storm of regret
    nothing changes

  2. under moss
    under fallen leaves
    forgotten acorns

  3. before she left
    before what passed for love —
    who were you then?

  4. as the breath leaves
    as the soul escapes
    life begins…
    can we post this on one of our blogs if we want to??? i have never done this before…. let me know….

  5. as the breath leaves
    as the soul escapes
    life begins
    i think i got spammed… let me try this again… can we post this to our own blog too????

  6. Yes, of course!
    And, if you like, post a link to this to encourage other folks to come dance with us.

  7. i went ahead and posted this over on just paisley…. i hope someone else will join in……
    poem dance!

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