the moon is a sliver of silver
be still, you tell me
i sitsnow comes
thick, soft, glittery
i cannot catch itit catches me
it grows around me
a pale and quiet burialthis is the only moment
snow comes
i am a stillness in the snowi am
this darkness in the white world
i am sitting stillsparrows in the snow
sun comes, snow goes
i sit
a poet’s notebook
05 march 02008 snapshot poem
9 responses to “05 march 02008 snapshot poem”
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What a beautiful day it was today. Everything covered by a thick white blanket of snow this morning. Your poem captures that special feeling and quietness.
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Very nice poem. I enjoyed the first line. Great imagery.
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good god woman…. what are you waiting for?????
this was lovely… i just needed to get that out!!!!! -
There’s something very restful in this piece. It’s not wise to fight the snow! I enjoyed this poem a great deal – it has much to offer a reader. Visual and vibrant in an easy manner.
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This really does capture the peaceful stillness of snow
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It makes a great start and holds interest. Thanks!
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Love the snapshot!
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You drew me right into this moment. Very nice!
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