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Snapshot Poem 05 February 02008

USA flag waving

Super Tuesday

The citizenry is aroused.
The citizenry is saying No! No! No!
But that’s not all.
The citizenry is saying Yes! Yes! Yes!

Smoky rooms are in disarray.
Pundits have much to say.
Conservatives are thumbing through the dictionary.
The left weighs liberal versus progressive.

Boomers wax nostalgic.
The young dance in the streets.
Thin blonds are sharpening their knives.
Soldiers stand at attention.

Men in suits hustle through doorways.
The religious fall to their knees.
The rich change the combinations on their safes.
Stockbrokers wear out the minus sign.

Around the world, people are watching.
The huddled mass holds its breath.
Bankers pace in boardrooms.
People are watching around the world.

What is happening? Who will it be?
White men check their zippers.
Women lift their children, they straighten
their shoulders. Who will it be?

 

Totally Optional PromptsThis week’s prompt was Mystery Thriller.

9 responses to “Snapshot Poem 05 February 02008”

  1. Ken Avatar
    Ken

    You did it, a Super Tuesday poem!
    And, interesting results. Still not sure how I feel about the whole thing, or what to think about it.
    A loss for words,

  2. ...deb Avatar

    I have to admit “White men check their zippers.” was my favorite line, of many.
    Good take on the crazy day, and night.

  3. gautami Avatar

    I can’t comment on your political system. However, it has a good pace till the end.

  4. Sweet Talking Guy Avatar

    Nice commentary, Who will it be? Politics are a real mystery to me…

  5. UL Avatar

    “The citizenry is aroused.
    The citizenry is saying No! No! No!
    But that’s not all.
    The citizenry is saying Yes! Yes! Yes!” I like this start and it only gets better, does the citizenry really know what they want?

  6. paisley Avatar

    if we are lucky??? the lesser of two evils…..
    very nicely done…

  7. AnthonyNorth Avatar

    I liked this – it covered all the expectations, etc. Mindst you, there isn’t really a mystery.
    Whoever it is, they’ll adapt, as usual, to Big Biz.

  8. Tumblewords Avatar

    That is a mystery, and a somewhat thriller – but the soup bone is the same…some really fine lines! Nice work!

  9. Linda Jacobs Avatar

    Oh, yes, you captured the mystery of the political system perfectly!
    The zipper line is my favorite, too!

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