a poet’s notebook

a proper life


Photo by Abigail Robinson

From England ~ Abi…

cat on the hearth
dog at the door

boots at the stoop
cows at the stile

thick coffee mugs
coat on the nail

chores to be done
eggs in the barn

hutch full of china
rugs on the floor

teacups of light
thin as a veil

beds deep & wide
feathers and down

done with the work
stars after dark

 

On a British mystery, one character promised another a proper life — I seem to have a deep traditional streak in me, because this is what emerged. it seemed ok when I wrote it; now it seems lame.

Comments welcomed.

2 responses to “a proper life”

  1. Dave Avatar

    Well, since you asked: I’d have to agree with your assessment. It’s not up to your usual standards. Still, it’s generous of you to share work that you’re less than satisfied with.

  2. SB Avatar

    Thank you, Dave. This comment is one of the nicest compliments I’ve ever received. It gave me a smile.

Leave a Reply

Discover more from WATERMARK

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading