snapshot 15 february 02006

40 winter river

last night’s brilliant moon
today’s bright sky

crows in the white branches
of the cottonwood

everywhere
winter

9 responses to “snapshot 15 february 02006”

  1. Bravo! I’ve not been here in so long (Sorry) – I come – I am happy to see you STILL putting out beautiful, great stuff!

  2. just lovely.

  3. Just last night in my Humanities class, we were looking at and talking about a painting by Corot that very much evokes the mood of your pic and the poem.
    ‘Tis the season, I suppose.

  4. I have a lingering urge to link a haibun off this poem. May I?

  5. Oh, yes! Please!

  6. snow haibun

    everywhere winter There’s snow coming fast out of the white sky. The distance blurs: only half way across the campus, the blockish tower of the library is soft as if seen through a scrim. Tree…

  7. Ooo, renga

    As Vivi would say with her big eyes: shiny! SB has written another piece of the almost-accidental renga that began with her poem here, continued with my “snow haibun.” Go see….

  8. Renga IV

    This is another piece of that sorta renga SB and I seem to be making. It begins with her poem here, and continues with “this one of mine. But if you don’t want to read back that far, you should…

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